ext_253525 ([identity profile] teh-dirty-robot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] motomotoyama 2007-12-13 09:28 pm (UTC)

I liked it way more than the Heroin Diaries. My problem with the Heroin Diaries is that you read that day's entry, and then Nikki or other people mentioned in the entry will comment on it, and it's really jarring, which makes it hard to get into. Especially in the case of Vanity (Now the Reverend Denise SomethingOrOther)--her commentary is ridiculously preachy in the way only born-agains can be.

The Dirt has a much better flow, even between chapters written by different band members. I suspect heavy editing, but regardless, it works and works well.

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